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Coherence: Transitions between Ideas
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On the contrary, different groups of people differ to technology as a complex tool. Purchasing an iPhone without looking at the features and becoming familiar with the product can erase the values of how technology can be more than just technology itself. An iPhone can simply turn into a limitation to the public on things you do physically with the shores you need to complete on a daily basis. Yet the ad shows the tone of optimism towards making a customer rethink twice that can instigate a regret feeling of not purchasing one. Personality, I think that the ad was convincing because it illustrated potential customers the clean view and general important details of why an iPhone is necessary to have.
There are many reasons why there is more than one brand of bottled water. Non-carbonated water is getting into the water business inexpensive .If a store can make their own brand of bottled water in its distribution center for 10 cents a bottle, and sells it for $1.25 a bottle; they will be making more money. If each business weren’t any branding in the water category, the business would eventually go 100 percent to price and private label. Brand is more important than price; the price won’t become the major factor until growth stops. When the growth stops, you fight for the war on price (Karolefski). All bottled waters on the market are safe. Any difference in price does not reflect as difference in safety. Each person might have a different preference in terms of taste, etc.The production of cost, the volume of production that each source can support, the cost of the transport, cost of the bottle can be factors that lead to why different bottled waters can retail in different prices (“FAQs”) . Companies at this point are currently making billions of dollars on water they extract from the ground, slap a label on and sell at competitive prices, which would be another reason why there are a variety of brands of bottled water. Each brand has its own price (klessig).
Bottled water is becoming popular nowadays. Water from household faucet is old fashioned. People are consuming more bottled water than they used to even though they’re spending more money for them. They can come from wells, springs, artesian wells or the municipal water supply. There isn’t much difference between bottled and tap water. The point is that bottled water is convenient. Their sales increased in the last few years because of its taste. A study( Birmingham University) showed that the participants which were 23 users of bottled water believed that bottled water are healthier, safer, cleaner and have a different taste. People expect bottled water to taste better, but there’s not much difference between the brands.