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Peer review for ethnography
Here are the pairings for those who (according to my records) have posted drafts on their. (Let me know if you aren’t listed and you have posted OR if the person you’re supposed to review hasn’t posted their entry.)
For yr review, please first indicate the main point the writer seems to be making about this subculture. (If the writer does not make it clear, you may say what the details seem to you to add up to; if author makes several main points about the subculture, which seems to be best supported by details and/or most interesting.) Then consider the level of detail. Does the writer give plenty of observational details that let you see the fieldsite and see members of the subculture “in action”? If not, please add questions to help the writer see where details might be added. Finally, consider organization–what organizational pattern does the writer seem to use? is it effective? are there alternative you could suggest?
Peer partners: 8 am
Angela and Melinda
Lindsay and Samantha
DeeDee and Sara
Stephen and Chris
Meredith and Tatiana (isn’t that what I said in class? let me know if not…)
Peer partners: 9 am
Melissa and Cecily
Greg and Manny
Decio and Jacob
Peer partners: noon
Caitlin and Matt
Samantha and Kevin
Torrie and Sam
Jess and Katrina
Peer partners: 2 pm
Jared and Kevin
Gene and Tim
Kristen and Lauren
Matthew and Michael
Amanda and Ryan
October 19th, 2009 at 9:52 pm
How come Im on there twice? It says im with Torrie and Joshua ?
October 20th, 2009 at 12:25 am
Sorry about that! Joshuah’s essay isn’t up, so do Torrie’s and I’ll fix post.
October 20th, 2009 at 9:41 am
Im sorry that I haven’t given my first draft or posted it but I haven’t been in class and I will def. work on it today and then I have it posted either tomorrow or thursday. when is the final draft due.
October 22nd, 2009 at 10:37 am
you said i was with brent btw =]
October 27th, 2009 at 6:00 pm
http://kaygbranco.blogspot.com/
that is my url to my blog sorry it had taken me so long to set it up .
October 27th, 2009 at 6:01 pm
http://kaygbranco.blogspot.com/
here is the URL to my blog.
sorry it had taken me so long to actually set it up .
October 27th, 2009 at 6:05 pm
sorry i actualy gave yoy the wrong URL.
this is the correct one http://kaegbee.blogspot.com/